I loved it
The deep intertwining story pulled at my heart in a strange way, keep up the good work.
Pretty cool I guess. Nothing too great though.
The idea was good, you presented it well, and the sprites looked good. My only gripe is that it was a tad short, but still, very good.
I can see this going somewhere.
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